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These are poetry drafts. I consider all my poetry in a constant state of drafting, some with revision ongoing, others merely gathering dust. Some have been published but will still be considered drafts.

N.B. When these posts were imported I noticed some of my reblogs also got pulled in. It should be ovious from the contents that they are reblogs from other writers. I am in the process of removing those posts.

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behind-the-veil-of-sanity:

Blurred Vision — A Remedy in One Act

The poet attempted an attribution,
in thought of love and praise
to the long and winding ways
of Medicine, but
addressing specifics — shivers
that arose without thought
like withdrawal
from nicotine sticks
or Absinthe – wormwood juice
lacked adhesion like old glue
left in limbo — only to portray
the poet a fool / addicted / frail;

addressing specifics — blurred vision
a general cause of concern &
the Cause of Concern for the poet
finding the general principles of sight
a bonus at their specific point in time:
the junction where tarmac ends
and gravel paths bind the journey’s end, blindness

avoided

— for now

by Dr Marvell and their
marvellous medical methods
aided by sharp surgical tools
making the cut
the ultrasound appliance
dissolving the opaque …
a silvery vacuum vortex
sucking up the dust
water
water
lots of water poured over the naked
unawares of what to come
unprotected
and by force held ajar
naked
unprotected
eye — the recipient
of the mint crystalline lens;

but the poet failed

to convey

in thought of love and praise
to the long and winding ways
of Medicine

as a single persistent utterance

interrupted

again and
again:

What if — it happens again.

But now, 24h on, the poet pictures the theatre,

in darkness, centerstage

on the theatre of mischief — a single giant eye

seeing nothing but blurred shadows;

a surgeon general wearing silverware:

sharp utensils / knives / fork / spoons

and a cleaning lady hoovering up

bits of old poet no longer needed

as the clown juggles stress balls —

an offering

taken.

The surgeon general dines on old eyes,

telling the poet he’s doing all right,

but the clown drops the ball

trying to keep the poet’s nerve

still — still a futile endeavour

on the second serving

of eye.

In the theatre of mischief

two eyes were consumed,

one poet entered

while another roamed alone

out of the nonemergency exit

into a world of bright light,

new possibilities in a world

with clear sight.

Blurred Vision — A Remedy in One Act

The poet attempted an attribution,
in thought of love and praise
to the long and winding ways
of Medicine, but
addressing specifics — shivers
that arose without thought
like withdrawal
from nicotine sticks
or Absinthe – wormwood juice
lacked adhesion like old glue
left in limbo — only to portray
the poet a fool / addicted / frail;

addressing specifics — blurred vision
a general cause of concern &
the Cause of Concern for the poet
finding the general principles of sight
a bonus at their specific point in time:
the junction where tarmac ends
and gravel paths bind the journey’s end, blindness

avoided

— for now

by Dr Marvell and their
marvellous medical methods
aided by sharp surgical tools
making the cut
the ultrasound appliance
dissolving the opaque …
a silvery vacuum vortex
sucking up the dust
water
water
lots of water poured over the naked
unawares of what to come
unprotected
and by force held ajar
naked
unprotected
eye — the recipient
of the mint crystalline lens;

but the poet failed

to convey

in thought of love and praise
to the long and winding ways
of Medicine

as a single persistent utterance

interrupted

again and
again:

What if — it happens again.

Forfeiting Fame for Fortune

A feeling nears — flutterings
from a nowhere close at hand,

{ buts fly
like bats —
at night }

at this particular point in time
particulars are moot
and debates with a mirroring
no ef**ng hoot,

the steam becomes tears
sliding down a self reflecting
like toboggans
on a childhood winter slope:

hot chocolate in a flask —
uncontainable brown tears
marking the path of a child
skiing slowly across a meadow
towards elevenses —
& warm chocolate
in reality a cold chocolate drink
— undrinkable

as scars from a broken flask
once becomes
scars from a broken flask
twice becomes
scars from a broken flask
— firmly rooted
in the mind of the adult reflecting

spaces &

traces of

the never found — the never
found and the cause
of the never found
and the cause
of the never finder —

now adultly seeking coin
shimmering in the morning dusk
of strangers,
as a feeling nears — flutterings
from a nowhere close at hand.

The Curse (explicit)

Locust on your crops
and plague on your people —
I hunger for your house to burn
and the ground to tilt
towards a hell welcoming
sizzling new members
to torment —

Woodlands without wanderers
— bliss!

I challenge a carnivorous cloud
to descend among the cow
-ards still standing, aimlessly
pissing their lives away
among the shrubberies
of tuppence pieces.

Woodlands without wanderers

— oh bliss!

Aaaaiiii (spoken with a northern accent)

Artificial Intelligence will never
increase the basic intelligence
of the populace at large.

Artificial Intelligence will never
tell you why (not that you doubted)
the answers are correct.

Artificial Intelligence will never
never teach the wastemen
the value of thought.

Artificial Intelligence will never
take the first step on any lunar surface
hitherto unknown.

Artificial Intelligence will never
write bad bad poetry
as it knows not of failure.

Artificial Intelligence will never
never ever rule my world
— the one unified mind

.

Fifty Shades of Jay

In a moment of lucidity,
unawares of my overhearing,
surveilling a state of mind
of another kind,
you said you saw fifty shades of Jay
and it scared you stiff;
In that moment of lucidity,
you had found a truth most profound,
a truth about a Jay hushed and often silenced
by those in charge: three men in black, or the fae;
In that moment
you signed the book of the dead
as spoken by the three witches of the Nay:
a jay does not have a shadow,
a Jay stands in the light, alone and Jaysome,
maybe asking for a Charlie’s whereabouts
or a Honcho’s advice on
everything
BUT!
always Jaysome and
always without shadows
of a doubt.

Kisses are cold. Cuddles creepy.

You asked me what I wanted to do

— touch you, feel your essence
& grow into a singularity

but the stars! & I am a flat earth fly

— touch you I want.
Kisses on rosy cheeks. Do
the right thing.

but the thing is imperfection.
Kisses cold. Cuddles creepy.

— I am of innocence borne.
Wo Hen Hao it sounded
like that. Then shut doors. Alone.

You asked me what I wanted to do
and I said love you in a language
you didn’t speak, then smiled
as I begun my walk of shame.

Moo – a Cow’s Confession

Today I drove through the suburbs
leaving the starry city behind,
headed out on the quiet highway
by junction 12 — you know the one.

I drove with eyes closed,
wanting no distractions near
as I retraced my youthful steps
to the place I once held dear.

I left the highway as once you charged:
left — left — top of hill — left!
then the third red house
on your right.

I waited by the polished door
for the dog to scratch and bark,
but no signs of the furry Chincas
to greet my dogged heart.

I rang the creamy doorbell twice
expecting the wonted Dot or Bear
to greet me like they always had,
a long long time now passed.

I searched the yard for signs
of
love,
of
passion,
of
the truth
of
why I came to be

here.

Today I drove
through the suburbs — slowly
needing to forget your truths
— unspoken.

Today I drove through the suburbs
leaving the starry city behind,
headed out on the quiet highway
towards Templestowe — once home.

Six Days of Blissful Truths

Six days of bliss: a period
of happy thoughts of a bright future
not expected, and not experienced
for, well, six whole years.

Six days of bliss: a period
of rural ramblings
among zebra cows, dotted ponds
and the Lady of the Lake
enkindling love a new essence.

Six days of bliss: a period
of positive poetry, bouncing
off ceilings needing paint
and assertive thoughts ruling.

Six days of bliss: a period
of signing up to — not abandoning
everyone and everything
too painful to consider.

Six days of bliss: a period
of a new following: welcome friend!
to this land I hope to cultivate,
enriching my own soil
and yours.

Six days of bliss: a period
that had to end in fire and fury,
rural life shelved and supposedly
only meant for guys and gals
of the gilded ages.

Six days of bliss: a period
I’ll try to cherish in thought
and mind as the leaves crumble
and fall penetrates a mind
once bent on survival.

Backstrokes in a Field of Green

I’d rather die alone

in fields of green,
alone bar a blue sky
with soaring larks above,
alone with only wasps
buzzing idly by,
alone among the dying dead
that all had felt that living
was swell —

than alone in a tired concrete jungle
surrounded by stiffs in shepherd’s clothing,
tired townspeople presenting
through rosy glasses views
I would rather they did not
so stubbornly support.

I’d rather die alone in fields of green,
with dotted ponds scattered round
like tears from a goddess —
euphoric.

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