(how does layout impact perception ? )
#1 in my usual style
paint me
your dreams
on rugged canvas
let broken light cross
unwanted patterns of angst
relinquish your thoughts
succumb to heart beat
for guidance
consciously
dreaming
in colours
of love
#2 compressed with reading guidance
paint me your dreams / on rugged canvas / let broken light cross / unwanted patterns of angst / relinquish your thoughts / succumb to heart beat for guidance /consciously dreaming in colours of love
#3 word stacking
paint me your dreams on rugged canvas let broken light cross unwanted patterns of angst relinquish your thoughts succumb to heart beat for guidance consciously dreaming in colours of love
Did either of these stand out as being better?
